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Quite a few times I thought about slowing it down to Sweet Property Of Pigfarts Rumble Roar Wizarding School Shirt add more feeling and introspection from Jesse around what was happening but thought it might detract from the pace of it, which I wanted to be quite high. Think I sacrificed a bit of clarity in doing that! Have noted down that this one might need breaking out into a couple of chapters. Could quite easily expand on some of the imagery and conflict. But probably the next few chapters are all going to seem that way It really is just breakneck speed and climax all the way. I was blocked from commenting or voting on anything for a while so I couldn’t reply to stuff or pretty much anything for that matter.